A few remarks.
The tenant list is wrong.
Question 1: Do you have the contract in English?
Question 2: Which additional cost to pay monthly or yearly? Maintinance, Waste, Water or insurance?
Question 3: How to pay the deposit? You already have Dave’s deposit?
Question 4: How to pay the monthly rent? Everyone by himself or all via me?
Question 5: Which additional papers I need to register at the Gemeente?
Question 6: Who is the actual owner? Is he living next door? I dont understand the address.
Question 7; Anything else you need?
Just to let you know:
Alfred and I arranged the move for Thursday. Dave will supply us with the keys.
Have a good day